In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
It is an undeniable fact that there are many people suffering from food shortage around the world despite of the improvement of agriculture. This essay is going to analyze some possible reasons behind this trend and also suggest viable solutions to deal with it.
As for the factors, the disparity between the rich countries and the poor ones plays a vital role in hunger issue. Those developed nations have the ability to make good use of their money on investing funds in developing efficient ways of growing foods. For example, new methods for eliminating the bugs and insects in vegetables and using light to control the speed of growing are both effective methods to increase the quality and quantity of food in well-developed countries. Moreover, these excessive food can be sold to other foreign areas resulting in earning a great deal of money. However, those people in impoverished countries remain hungry due to the insufficient money and technology.
Fortunately, there are some workable solutions for companies and individuals all over the world to assist them. In terms of companies, they can provide a general understanding of effective growing methods for those who have limited knowledge of agriculture. For instance, they can give them some useful mechines so as to increase the speed of collecting crops or fruits. As for individuals in the society, we can donate either money or food to international charities in order to help those people going hungry to support their basic need.
In conclusion, it is true that a great deal of people still lack enough food to eat but there are also many ways for companies and individuals to assist them.
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- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...they can give them some useful mechines so as to increase the speed of collecting crops ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, still, well, as for, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0615942029 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7721227356 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6780379868 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.416666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147298941146 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550448136612 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505400162077 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105222572375 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721372679617 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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