Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences.
Playing sports for a country or a club is a famous occupation. These, well known sportsmen have income that is much greater than individuals in other important professions. Although, some people favours this trend while other believe that this is injustice. In my opinion, every occupation has its own significance and having more money in one type of work does not make it injustice for individual in other profession.
First of all, it is a fact that athletes are very well paid and are famous all around the world. Moreover, they are very well facilitated and are also preferred over general population. For instance, famous cricketer Sachin tendulkar have a balance of more than hundred crore rupees and is among top ten richest men of India. furthermore his salary is about ten to twenty lacs a month. Nevertheless he is specially paid for every match he play. By viewing all these facts and figures, we might convinced that it is not justice but this only one side of the picture.
in contrary, the above luxury is not uniform, some individuals in one sport are paid more than individual in other. For example members of Pakistani football team have salaries of few thousand rupees. In addition to this, a sportsman professional life starts fading as time passes on and become an ordinary citizen with a very low income as he grow above fifties. Opposite to this, if we consider another occupation like medicine, doctors earning keep increasing even though he retired. This is because in many professions experience counts rather than physical fitness.
To conclude, every work has its own advantages and drawbacks. some might earn more but that would be for a short time while other has an income that which peaked with time. So, I believe judging a job only by salary and its amount would be an injustice.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'first of all', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.207602339181 0.247107183377 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.155533422707 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105263157895 0.0946595960268 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0584795321637 0.0501214627716 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.046783625731 0.0437548338989 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137426900585 0.122226691241 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0380116959064 0.0403226058552 94% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62816926267 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0116959064327 0.0326793684256 36% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0964912280702 0.0861772015684 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0116959064327 0.021408717616 55% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00877192982456 0.011925033212 74% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1835.0 1933.35771543 95% => OK
No of words: 310.0 316.048096192 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91935483871 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.338709677419 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241935483871 0.28420135186 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174193548387 0.203846283523 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122580645161 0.137316102897 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62816926267 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.037074148 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 67.2492251024 60.7387585426 111% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.2222222222 20.7743622355 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7101553231 49.517814964 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.944444444 127.492653851 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.7743622355 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.814263465372 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 3.99599198397 325% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.4157706093 49.1944974215 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.40860215054 1.69124875643 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262798443441 0.332605444948 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0689947975562 0.102741220458 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0715673404898 0.0668466124924 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.438410281354 0.534860350844 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.114595041008 0.148594505496 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874905913994 0.134430193775 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565585927884 0.0742795772207 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.173943708529 0.324371583561 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0602497555657 0.0638462369009 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170726767876 0.228012699653 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737671174629 0.058150111329 127% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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