There is no denying in the fact that visit to museums and historical sites is only paid by outsiders not by native folks and it is important for them to go. There are a plethora of causes and in further piece of writing I will mention reason with the method of fascinating people towards these sites.
To start with the main reason, netizens do not go because they have already seen it many times so they know the history and its values. Hence, they do not get curious or show interest to pay visit. In vice versa these places only roamed by other place masses owing to they have excitement and heard about these monuments. For example, The Taj Mahal is one from the seven wonders but here mostly foreigner visit happens everyday instead of local humans. Another reason is that local individuals want to add memories of other beautiful and adventerous ventures so they go out to do experience and fun.
Explaining about the ways which can be adopted to captive the indigenous towards these areas and buildings. First step that can be taken is to appeal population by arranging various activities overthere. Eventually, this would bring them here, they will be able to have fun and knowledge simultneously. Furthermore, the other method which can impliment is that tickets and discount should be given so it can be proven fruitfull to get local community to sight seen.
To conclude, it is necessary for local resident to go on places those are presents their nearby if they go and see then it would be more visited by other places masses in count
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, for example, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72794117647 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47897735361 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599264705882 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2409987036 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.166666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265152388879 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881601581496 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408319217883 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153601232903 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160863762432 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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