Television programs and movies have become saturated with violent content.
What are some resulting social problems and how can we deal with them?
Films and shows being televised this days are filled with uncensored content. This essay will discuss the problems resulting like increased crime rates and indecent dressing amongst young adults and the solution to this menace will also be discussed further like Censoring every programs and films before being displayed on channels.
Without any doubt,the social issues associated with violent content in movies is increased crime rate. This usually happen when every step that needs to be taken in achieving this act has been well demonstrated in the movie. It is believed that the younger ones will love to practicalise what they have seen. Display of guns, bank robbery and pocket picking without being caught in the act gives the viewers some moral to try it out. Relatively, this also causes nudity among youths especially the females. They choose their favorite celebrities and emulate their dressing habit leaving them nude. Consequently, they are tagged prostitutes and cultists. For instance, it was gathered from a group of young robbers involved in a bank robbery that they got their solid ideas from a movie they watched.
However, these problems can be solved by ensuring every movies and television programs are censored extensively not giving room for any loop hole before it is sold out in the market. Many people are convinced that if the government should create a ministry that will look into what is being displayed, the society will be crime free. Children will be allowed to watch any program without fear of being corrupt. For example, a musical video of a music artiste in Lagos Nigeria was banned from market because it contained ladies dancing nakedly, aggressive lyrics and show of sexual abuse. Hence, this has curb many other artiste from releasing anything of such thereafter.
In conclusion, films and shows in recent times contains features that are corrupt. This could lead to increase crime rates as well as indecent dressing amongst young adults. However, the probable solution to this is by ensuring the contents of every videos be be looked into properly by the governing body before it's being released to viewers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, however, if, look, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15909090909 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43080241105 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588068181818 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4008622305 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.888888889 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134266377131 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043231413132 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597531493697 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789500219059 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399837751537 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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