I don’t think we need music anymore. In the past, people need a way to transmit information without losing content, the pitches and yawns of music guaranteed a precise transfer. In contemporary setting, people listen to music for entertainment.
In my opinion music is no longer useful in the world today. We don’t need music to set alert to friends on the ridge of another mountain. We have cannabis, fentanyl and other neuro incentivizing drugs creates joy directly in our brain.
A traditional music in my knowing, is a music more widely spreaded. The international music, contains information not yet known to the domestic listeners. It has no value in transmitting information. I don’t think the comparison is fair, traditional music is so much better. A singer can express love, compassion, enjoyment and other daily tasks.
On an artistic level, international music may have greater value. The country I came from, India, has the best music. T-series is the most watched/subscribed channel on Youtube. That means international music is less than domestic music. I think more is better, India has the most, so Indian music the best.
At last, if an international music can replace daily talks and languages. Letting us talk to each other, or share some basic information singing one international song. The international music is a good tool to have. In conclusion, India traditional music is better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... listen to music for entertainment. In my opinion music is no longer useful in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24347826087 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15795870993 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595652173913 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3134488594 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.3 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.5 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4926366605 0.244688304435 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171037372386 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114462713753 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291019764843 0.151304729494 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448314118737 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.93 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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