There are many different types of music in the world today. why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays ?

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There are many different types of music in the world today. why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays ?

it is generally acknowledged, that, different countries and people have their various brand of music which they relate to and enjoy. In as much as, we observe varying duties, songs form an integral fabric of our everyday life. In my essay, I will be reflecting on the benefits of musical works and compare the folk tunes of other lands and the universally accepted sounds.

To start with, music, is part of the identity of any group of persons; be it a nation, tribe or gang, it speaks to their orientation, history, culture and traditions. In addition, it is also a tool of information dissemination and a useful companion at odd moments. it was used and being used as treatment modalities for a diverse range of psychological illness. Again, in the Bible, this was the medium used to calm the frayed nerves of King Saul by David, when his bout of 'madness' descends.

Secondly, the local notes of any community cannot be said is superior to the widely acclaimed beats that seem <span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="seem "></span> in vogue today because, each is known to serve its own unique and specific purpose. However, no civilization <span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="civilization "></span>is<span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="said "></span> superior to another, in fact, every development is <span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="said "></span>connected one to the other. Most of the recent genres, when looked at critically, is<span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="found "></span> an offshoot of these so-called ancient ensemble. for instance, rap is <span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="seen "></span>a blend of spoken word and afrobeat, while pop from funk. One can make bold to say that the popular arrangements of today are either direct adaptations of the pre-existing sounds peculiar to a race or a pure change.

To close, music is a necessity that the society thrives upon - music is food for the soul, they say and no type or technique of music is more beneficial than another, as each is for its audience and the basically serve the same functions, that is, entertain, educate and pass messages.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in addition, in fact, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77777777778 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.35115967068 2.80592935109 191% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633633633634 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.8600831455 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.0 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100595785964 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051983988181 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779989366343 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120270828998 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100095610772 0.056905535591 176% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.54 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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