There are many problems caused by mobile phones.What are the advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones?
Mobile phones have become the necessity of our day-to -day life. Howerver, there are myriads of issues created by cell phones.
On the positive side, mobile phone is the best cut -edge technological device for communication. We can stay in touch with our relatives and friends in every emergency situation that can occur .Furthermore, parents can be aware of their children and this is the reason the mobile phone has become a compulsory gadget that everyone can not imagine his life without.For example, when my children are out of home and have various stuff to handle, I always know about their activities and their location due to the mobile phone, which help us to be in permanent direct contact with each other. It creates kind an atmosphere of safety for a parent and a kid.
As every garden has some weeds, the mobile phones also have many downsides.One of the negative sides of the mobile phone is its harmful impact on humans’ health. For instance, late night chats, mobile games on bright screen can lead to eye problems and also to a sleep disorders. What is more, many scientists prove that network waves can result in skin cancers, which is extremely fatigue for every person.These all are extremely dangerous for health and brings to a grave results such as headaches and skin diseases.
To sum up, mobile phone is necessary for our modern lives today. However, it is helpful or not , depends on our ways of using it. It will be beneficial for us if we use it correctly on true purpose and on appropriate time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76315789474 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59752881461 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627819548872 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 124.030854599 49.4020404114 251% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 115.181818182 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25954079096 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982142728428 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799744810547 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154968930252 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525684764842 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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