There is a general increase in anti-social behaviors and lack of respect for others. What are the causes and solutions?
Nowadays there has been a surge of anti-social behaviors and disrespect to people within the community. In my perspective, I reckon that this tendency stems from cultural interference and the provision of ethical courses could be implemented to tackle this issue.
Admittedly, there are many compelling reasons to explain the growth of this trend. Firstly, the cultural resemblance causes the decrease in ethics which plays an essential role in erecting social cohesion. It is the youngsters who easily abandon their indigenous customs which were accumulated for ages by their ancestors accounting for having strong gravitation to exotic ones, so it can trigger the loss of traditional beliefs and facilitate the import of negative ideologies and ill-manner attitude. For instance, during the immerse of the Black lives matter revolution, some Vietnamese had learned some information via watching Western media, leading to the spark of several rebellions within some big cities. Thus, this assimilation can cause some negative behaviors due to the loss of indigenous ethics.
Therefore, the government should have some urgent measures to address this trend. The first and foremost solution is that they should provide some courses to improve traditional beliefs and attitudes. Thanks to the vivid lessons, the young may have a chance to approach and instill their historical customs, so it helps them realize which behavior can cause detrimental effects on their community, improving their awareness and the deep affection for other residents. For instance, American children usually have field trips to visit historically famous locations such as Boston dock, a place where the civil war occurred, where they can learn about the fierce of war. Thus, it can relieve the negative effects of this trend on the account of raising ethical awareness.
In conclusion, although negative behavior and ill-mannered attitude may be a consequence of cultural assimilation, it can be tackled by providing some courses for children to strengthen social cohesion
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 524, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...l-manner attitude. For instance, during the immerse of the Black lives matter revolution, s...
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Line 3, column 501, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put between 'have' and 'field'.
Suggestion: have usually field
...idents. For instance, American children usually have field trips to visit historically famous loca...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 514, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'fielded'.
Suggestion: fielded
...nstance, American children usually have field trips to visit historically famous loca...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r children to strengthen social cohesion
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, may, so, still, then, therefore, thus, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52063492063 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86120346371 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609523809524 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0323652762 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.769230769 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149430478736 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528777817985 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492423509287 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932774988282 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00626075991899 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 524, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...l-manner attitude. For instance, during the immerse of the Black lives matter revolution, s...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 501, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put between 'have' and 'field'.
Suggestion: have usually field
...idents. For instance, American children usually have field trips to visit historically famous loca...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 514, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'fielded'.
Suggestion: fielded
...nstance, American children usually have field trips to visit historically famous loca...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r children to strengthen social cohesion
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, may, so, still, then, therefore, thus, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52063492063 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86120346371 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609523809524 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0323652762 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.769230769 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149430478736 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528777817985 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492423509287 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932774988282 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00626075991899 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.