Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
It is believed that there are colossus children born at the late stage of life due to their parents’ decision. In my perspective, I reckon that this is a negative tendency and its consequence stems from the occupation.
Admittedly, this trend has prevailed recently in modern society due to several reasons. Firstly, people desire to devote their time to move up in their career ladder so having offspring should be postponed. In fact, the young workers are obligated to have overtime working hours on a regular basis since the global economic integration generates tons of workloads and deadlines for the employees. As a result, they are facing the loss of sufficiently physical energy required for raising and educating their children, leading to procrastination in giving birth. For instance, Japan has a concern about the surge of the aging labor force, and the population accounted for their terrific work culture.
Therefore, I concur with its drawbacks since it triggers detrimental effects on communities. Firstly, it affects the natural development of adolescents. It is clear that to breed lately could cause some health risks to those who are immature. To illustrate, scientists encourage people to become parents before the age of 35 and if not, children may have a higher opportunity to suffer from Down syndrome which hampers the growth of communication the thought-provoking ability compared to others. In addition, this disorder also transmits through many generations by the mutated genetic mechanism, spoiling the fingerprint and causing the burden for individuals and society
In conclusion, people make a decision about breeding lately accounted for the career prospects and I reckon that the government should implement some urgent measure to tackle it in order to avoid the negative impacts to the next generation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35517241379 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98032589652 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644827586207 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.8327108943 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.416666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133299752643 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439317625564 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038712275076 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756548307906 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369581768722 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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