There is a general increase in anti-social behaviours and lack of respect for others. What are the causes and solutions
The modern world is filling up with more people who behaves anti-socially and disrespect others and the situation is becoming a critical concern for authorities. This essay intends to analyse some reasons for and will suggest some measures to tackle this burning issue.
First and foremost, the main reason for the immoral behaviour may be because of the influence of the media and celebrities. People tend to consider many celebrities as their role model and try to imitate their action and violence from movies. For instance, the movies of Jackiechan inspires many youngsters to fight and believe that anti-social behaviour can make them a hero. Furthermore, the children who are exposed to domestic violence can be seen as more disrespectful and may indulge in delinquencies compared to the other peer groups. Many soulful measures can be taken to uplift the moral side of people.
One of the immediate remedy may be the regulation of government on the medias about the content of the movies. The authorities can make a stringent law to avoid the violence and anti-social behaviours and should impose a heavy levy on the people who violate it. Besides, parents should be educated about their crucial role in moulding the future generation and right measures should be taken to take care of the children from broken families by the concerned authorities. For example, children who are isolated and subjected to violence should be counselled and rehabilitated with the help of teachers and other childcare authorities.
The importance of respecting others and the harmony needed in a society must be elicited by the government in each nook and corner to create awareness among people.
To recapitulate, even though the prevalence of crimes and other violent behaviour are on a surge in our society because of the influence of media and bad parenting, it can be tackled effectively by educating about the importance of peace and harmony in a society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, if, may, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.146875 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86940862537 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51875 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0501432127 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.692307692 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119955876654 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479701423511 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537559369566 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660561317435 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302731733863 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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