There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher.
What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Now we are in the Industry 4.0 era, so people have been doing impossible things because of the power of intelligent. However, it is clear that artificial activities are a serious reason for global warming. This essay will analyze the reasons why our world become warmer by artificial activities and solutions for this issue.
It is undeniable that major human activities have threatened the world, especially the global warming phenomenon. The key rationale in favor of this view is that the rapid growth in industry and people is not available to control the consequence of the technology boom. Electricity which is the backbone of almost industry field is produced in many different materials, namely water, fossils and nuclear. In hydroelectric, the jungle is always deforested, while in thermal electric, coal is burned to produce power. All of these activities release emission to the air and lead to air pollution, and finally, the greenhouse which is known as the main reason for global warming emerged.
As the seriously aforementioned causes, solutions for these issues are a vital mission. Firstly, regarding fuel for electricity, there are several alternative fuels which are friendly with nature, such as wind and solar energy. In addition, these energies can also be renewable, so they are would be a great choice for replacing fossil fuels. Secondly, the environmental campaigns that aim to improve the awareness of people about saving energy are very essential. For instance, there is a campaign that is called Earth-hours encourage residents to turn off all electric devices in 1 hour to reduce energy consumption.
In conclusion, the backward ways to produce electricity are the main problem that leads to global warming and we should widely use alternative energies such as wind and solar power, and organize more environmental campaigns to improve the awareness of humanity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 344, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...of almost industry field is produced in many different materials, namely water, fossils and nu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2880794702 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90371675336 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579470198675 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9207829223 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.071428571 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12807105398 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432254476559 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372098244219 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797745705508 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288387769023 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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