Today, high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
21st century has opened a new era of modernization and techniques. Advertisement is considered to be an outstanding innovation in the field of modern era. It is common hypothesis the habitants of any society can be easily driven by means of glamour world of media which eventually make them convinced in buying certain things against them needs. As far as, my opinion is concerned, I will stay with this thought and will highlights the reason behind it.
Firstly, brand selection is common happening of today. People are becoming more brand conscious and paying twice cost of any article under the umbrella of brand. The underlying success companies in an open reflection of their outstanding commercial techniques. For instance, Junaid Jamshed is one renowned ready-made dresses shop captured the market by making eye catching commercials on television. Moreover, some magazines front pages are purchased by J. so that people will memorize its name. As a matter of fact, by doing so people started avoiding cheaper things.
Furthermore, some buyers might go to the extent of shopping which they not even need. One can say that glamorous world of advertisement is facilitating community more towards expensive objects.
Secondly, concept of hiring brand ambassador for the publicity of any specific good is a mean of motivating people. In this context I would like to put down the example of world renowned player Wasim Akram who is an ambassador of ONE TOUCH GLUCOMETER. Although, Glucometer, which is sugar checking device, is a need of diabetic patients, but nowadays purchase of ONE TOUCH GLUCOMETER is outstanding on behalf of Wasim Akram popularity. In other words, one can say that, brain of people can be deviated by such marketing techniques. Hence, the retail of any products can be increased through attractive advertisements.
To conclude, I per down saying that today’s world market is an open expression of powerful media and not the actual depiction of people needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, as a matter of fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22741433022 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95494648637 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619937694704 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1042270898 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3157894737 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8947368421 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.094846921558 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0274668592914 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357396662749 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588270668187 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345778383118 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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