Nowadays, there are many products being sold because of their advertisement, while they are not necessary for customers. Some people decide to spend money on product being advertised on TV, billboard, social networks or the hand of celebrities despite having owned another one. I strongly agree with this statement that advertisement can influence customers buying behavior.
Many manufacturers try to increase their sales by hiring famous people or celebrities to present their products. This method would be useful or a waste of money depending on how popular the presenters are, their life style and also what area they involve. For instance, Cristiano Ronaldo could raise the sales of sportswear product as he is one of the greatest sport players, in addition, his picture could induce his followers to spend money on new pair of shoes being worn by him, although they have got plenty of footwear in cabinets.
Alternatively, without employing the well-known people, some organisations expand their income by introducing promotions to the clients. This strategy usually needs less investment than the previous one, whereas it is often effective for the goods which are used in everyday life: food, office appliance, travelling tickets etc. In case of food, many groceries attempt to clear their remaining food in stock by placing a “buy 2 get 1 free” sign on the food which will pass the expiration date in the next few days, as a result, many people often decide to buy two pieces to get the other one for free in spite of having no need to purchase more than one.
In conclusion, advertising is one of the good ways to raise the sales of products. It can be either useful or waste investment depending on the ways it is used. I totally agree with the statement that advertisement have an influence in buying behavior, so customers should thick carefully before purchasing any goods.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...heir remaining food in stock by placing a 'buy 2 get 1 free' sign on th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07643312102 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78504960063 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611464968153 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.2905483223 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.833333333 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119891331351 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485388281184 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355373343463 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755781825943 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158376072047 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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