today the high sales of popular consumers goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Modern world has became a world of advertisements.We come across variety of advertises in our daily life. I completely agree that these advertisements have a huge role in selling of many consumer goods which are not actually required by the society.
Firstly, with the advancement in technology ads have became a part of our routine which can not be neglected. Various mediums like TV, newspapers, internet, long hoardings on road,etc are used to attract the customers. The promotion of many products are done by celebrities who have huge fan following. All these have a definite impact on consumers who come across these ads quite often. These certainly motivates them in buying products which are of little or no use.
Other important factor affecting is the pace at which technology is growing. Many electronic gadgets become obsolete within few months and the new ones with better specifications take their place. The advertisers play a vital role in magnifying its significance resulting in great response from the consumers. Also, certain goods are projected as status symbol by the ad makers. People are made to feel as if they need to buy them just to prove they belong to a certain class in the society. Advertisers know the attitude of their customers and they are aware how to increase the demand of their brands. The growth and demand of certain brands like apple, gucci, nike and many more clearly back our argument because all these brands launch their products with a successful ad campaign leading to it. Thus,technology and the image of brand are used as effective tools by marketers.
Finally, to conclude I completely agree that advertising can lead to high sales even if these goods are not the primary requirements. The main reason behind these being the skills of the advertisers in attracting customers by the brand’s image and various sources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, firstly, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09032258065 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84983158492 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4060183444 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8235294118 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11764705882 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138481116321 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044897423789 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514111346712 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964713571902 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406393600671 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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