Today it is common practice for many business meetings and business training to take place online. Do you advantages of new development outweigh the disadvantages?
It is evident that nowadays many businessmen and women carry out their work online, especially for training and meetings. While this development may bring about some benefits, I would argue they are eclipsed by the drawbacks.
On the one hand, doing business online offers people several merits, especially in infectious disease period. For example, in the Covid-19 situation, there are many countries forcing citizens to say at home in order to implement the social distancing policy. That leads to the fact that face-to-face conservations are unable to be made. Thanks to working online, many businessmen can maintain their relationships with staff as well as partners. Therefore, the plus side of the online business should not be overlooked.
On the other hand, I am of the opinion that the aforementioned advantages are at the expense of greater demerits. The most outstanding disadvantage which has to be faced up with is the unreliability. This is shown by the following example. My neighbour, who is a young entrepreneur, had transferred a large sum of money for the manager of a computer company to cooperate by making video calls. However, after a period of losing contact with this manager, he started investigating the information of this company and found that there was not any manager like the person who had joined in this call with him. That means he had been cheated out of money. As this story illustrates, the disadvantages of doing business online are numerous.
Given the aforementioned points, despite the benefit of keeping up relationships among people, online business has many more negative aspects than the positives. It is thus hoped that professionals are carefully taken into consideration l their work arrangement.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22775800712 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06746703077 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615658362989 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1074239546 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8125 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191486896308 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597172833651 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675183875646 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107724296608 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276618705647 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.