Today more people are travelling than ever before.
Why is this the case?
What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words
Since the birth of vacation, travelling for leisure purpose was largely confined to the middle and wealthy classes. Increased accessibility to various destinations is one of the many factors that encourage travelling. The experience that travellers gain from travelling locally and abroad can also give them lifelong personal benefits.
The advancement in air transports and railways have improved considerably, compared to the mode of transportation in the early days. Aeroplanes have made travelling easier and become more affordable. AirAsia, for instance, a low-cost airline company now make flights to Hawaii from Kuala Lumpur available at a rate that is three or four times cheaper than most airlines largely accessible to the rich. Trains also help travellers get around in a city or travel to another side of a country with less hassle. This is evident in Japan, where the Shinkansen bullet trains allow passengers travelling from Kyoto to Tokyo within three hours, which is faster than eight hours bus journey. At the turn of 21st century, a variety of accommodation booking websites or mobile apps have offered a wider range of accommodation options and facilitated arrangement process. A few great examples are Airbnb, HomeAway and Expedia.com.
These technological developments have undoubtedly enhanced the local and global travel experience. At a deeper level, travellers also broaden their horizons from their travels. They have the chance to be exposed to a different language, people, sight, smell, or a completely unique culture that can be both an exciting and overwhelming experience. Siem Reap, for example, while it is renowned for its magnificent historical monument, Angkor Wat, tourists also witness the lack of proper public roads and that children frequently chase and beg tourists for money. An experience like this may allow travellers to appreciate what they have back home, understand the historical impact on current situations, and learn to respect the differences.
In conclusions, most people now can travel to most destinations they wish, owing to enhanced accessibility and technological advances. They also have the chance to gain personal growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51928783383 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00646340636 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626112759644 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3082248521 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.411764706 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88235294118 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254177948464 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755565881045 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053425069476 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147907637059 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481299356037 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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