As we all know that since the start of internet usage it has evolved a lot. More and more utilization of networking and the internet has become common among the nations for every purpose, whether it could be communication or data storage, the internet is serving all the purposes. However, consequences are alongside this are unavoidable. This essay will discuss the issues and suggest proper solutions to curb this issue.
Increased use of the web and its services could result in a lack of physical contact and emotions. As the internet has taken the lives of people at its control, it is hard to believe that more than 90% of the public using the internet these days. which is an enormous amount and main usages are recorded as mobile devices and computers which bring health issues such as migraine, diminishing of vision, carpal tunnel syndrome due to continuous use of the mouse. Although these problems are not acute they get serious with time. Besides this there is insecureness, no one has the idea that who is spying on them, The Internet is like an ocean where anyone could possibly read other messages with simple hacks.
On the contrary, safe and secure use of the internet could benefit us in many ways. Using private internet sources and firewalls could prevent us from unknown web attacks. It's always safe to avoid public wifi and access points. Using parental controls will help on restricting particular sites that children should not browse for. A survey conducted in New York has revealed that more than 70 % of users are depending on public served wifi or sources to utilize in their daily lives, which is why they are more prone to hackers and losing their data. This could be prevented by using VPN or firewall protections which could help us fighting such attacks.
To conclude, although there are many uses of web and internet they are not profitable unless used in a proper manner. It has its up's and down's and it's our responsibility to maintain its balance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...e public using the internet these days. which is an enormous amount and main usages a...
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Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ome due to continuous use of the mouse. Although these problems are not acute they get s...
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Line 3, column 656, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
... Internet is like an ocean where anyone could possibly read other messages with simple hacks. ...
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Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...s revealed that more than 70 % of users are depending on public served wifi or sources to uti...
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Line 5, column 633, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to fight' or 'fight'.
Suggestion: to fight; fight
...irewall protections which could help us fighting such attacks. To conclude, although ...
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Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper manner" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...net they are not profitable unless used in a proper manner. It has its ups and downs and its our r...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...er manner. It has its ups and downs and its our responsibility to maintain its bala...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82748538012 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47386358152 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567251461988 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1262780841 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1176470588 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94117647059 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18484647305 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636826043862 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567069661176 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115898885778 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331126007176 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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