Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a suggestion that universities or colleges should give priority to the balanced number of male and female students in each major. From my perspective, I completely disagree because this tendency shows its impractical factor.
The main reason that schools should not strive to balance the number of both genders because this process is often complicated, which requires school staff to spend a relatively large amount of time and effort to accomplish. For instance, in Can Tho University, approximately 8000 students attend this school every year so that the likelihood of including 4000 male and 4000 female students is extremely low. Therefore, it is virtually impossible to list all of these students into distinct groups with equal numbers of gender. Furthermore, such courses as nursing are more prevalent, attracting more female applicants than that of males, and it would be difficult to aim for equal proportions.
Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, I also believe that it would be unfair to base admission to university courses on gender. Instead, the number of males and females in universities should be entirely based on their hobbies and qualifications because both men and women have the same opportunities, which directly lays the foundation for their later careers. In contrast, if they are forced to study to fill courses with equal gender, they will not find themselves enthusiastic and motivated enough. Consequently, this would have an adverse effect on students’ performance.
In conclusion, I believe that the selection of universities students should be based on merit, and it would be both impractical and unfair to change to a selection based on gender.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36666666667 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01123866524 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585185185185 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8285072462 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.727272727 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227237533578 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867574944847 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064961265823 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144414020946 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474944931356 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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