Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female student in every subject?
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The equality of genders in the world is not always being approved by some places. there are still distinguishes between the efficiency of female and male in specific work and commitment. it is claimed that boys has much better quality, so girls are often being restricted and unaccepted to enroll a variety of universities. I, generally, think this is not an good example to provide and develop humane balancy.
Consider the fact that woman in the past had no opportunities to approach education, nor the universal program, they had to depend on man. Eventually, there would be worldwide argument and discussion on the privilleges of women whether they are allowed to achieve the socially academic certificate. However, according to the general view, it seems as if they cannot be awarded for sophisticated subject like science. if that's the case, a number of colleges decided to change the propotion of number of female and male. Yet, this will accidentally skip out those significantly skifull ones and they will not be able to increase the abilities.
Of course, there are gender-specific personalities and competence. For instance, while the male are excellent at finding new techniques and solutions and considerable analytical abilities, female seems to achieve diligence as well as a great deal of patience and hard-work. Although he man abilities,yet, can suprise many professors, the higher score in some exams is not always ensured. What all makes the difference is the more effective studying enviroment.
In conclusion, female and male are equal in intelligence and scholastic capability. they show distinct competence and excellence and are entitled to participate in any class they desire. Moreover, the balance could improve vital soft skills including teamwork and communication skills, which is worth for the service.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36896551724 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08769180228 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648275862069 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6770254455 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3125 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125737403275 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408759792785 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567342365784 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681927378182 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0115909360599 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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