Parents and teachers make many rules for the children to encourage good behavior and protect them from danger. However, children would benefit from few rules and greater freedom.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
A lot of children nowadays are told not smart enough to make their own decision properly, so that parents consider them to obey the rules in order to achieve good behavior and stay away from danger. However, some people claim that it is not always efficient for them to follow those rules as they must have their personal suggestion and greater freedom. I intentionally approve with the idea of giving children allowance to decide what would they benefit from and how would they choose their ways of approach their problems in general.
First yet, because of the unability of giving out the best solution in some cases which they could face in real life, parents ought to provide rules and confinements for them. This, accidentally destroys the capablity of being independent. When they are being forced to live in the most protected enviroment, they will have very little real - world experience. Of course, at one time, the
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, in general, of course, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 157.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89808917197 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47218949073 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694267515924 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7791855114 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.857142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269176294407 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096897067089 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089844319051 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193081940057 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121722202334 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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