The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society.
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In reality, today's social ties are more mediated. While this may bother you, many individuals opt to initiate and sustain relationships on social media. You think it's ridiculous, don't you? But I'm going to show you a different side to this, and you'll have to realize that the media has more benefits than drawbacks.
On the other hand, because the purpose of social media is to bring people together, you can become friends with individuals you've never met before. You worry if you'll be able to make friends with them and how you'll be able to keep strong. Consider how you both approach one other and begin saying hello, either because it's not face-to-face and therefore less awkward, or because you don't have a common topic when you have to sit face to face to converse. You may talk to each other whenever you want and whenever you have spare time, without having to wait for the two of you to meet. When you have an issue, you may turn to your social media buddies for help. It must be acknowledged that offering guidance via text messages and phone conversations is more convenient and psychologically beneficial. Furthermore, it saves time for those who lead hectic lives, allowing them to devote that time to other pursuits. People can speak with anybody at any time, no matter where they reside, thanks to the advancement of modern technology and internet links. When you're studying away from home and can't visit your parents, for example, you may video call them. Furthermore, businesses benefit from the advancement of technology so that workers may work from home during difficult epidemic scenarios or collaborate with partners in other countries.
Individuals, on the other side, are concerned that the abuse of social media to create distance will erode the social relationships that we previously had via face-to-face interactions. That's why a video conference is convenient, but unlike a face-to-face meeting, it can't clearly exhibit the contact link. It's probable that the rise of social media may jeopardize people's privacy rights. However, these issues are being addressed and improved in order to increase security and provide additional advantages to individuals.
In conclusion, while social media has its drawbacks, it is a quick and easy method to connect with people all over the globe and form relationships that would otherwise be impossible to form by simply taking care of yourself. in face-to-face interaction. It carries with it a lot of good vibes and experiences that you should think about.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...social media. You think its ridiculous, dont you? But Im going to show you a differe...
^^^^
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...You think its ridiculous, dont you? But Im going to show you a different side to t...
^^
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
... show you a different side to this, and youll have to realize that the media has more...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 125, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you've
...you can become friends with individuals youve never met before. You worry if youll be...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 161, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...ls youve never met before. You worry if youll be able to make friends with them and h...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 209, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
... able to make friends with them and how youll be able to keep strong. Consider how yo...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 383, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... therefore less awkward, or because you dont have a common topic when you have to si...
^^^^
Line 2, column 429, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'face to'.
Suggestion: face to
...ave a common topic when you have to sit face to face to converse. You may talk to each other wh...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1058, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...ern technology and internet links. When youre studying away from home and cant visit ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 1092, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... When youre studying away from home and cant visit your parents, for example, you ma...
^^^^
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...usly had via face-to-face interactions. Thats why a video conference is convenient, b...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
..., but unlike a face-to-face meeting, it cant clearly exhibit the contact link. Its p...
^^^^
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
..., but unlike a face-to-face meeting, it cant clearly exhibit the contact link. Its p...
^^^^
Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...form by simply taking care of yourself. in face-to-face interaction. It carries wi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2107.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02863961814 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76524374803 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575178997613 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3813852796 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9523809524 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90476190476 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291126326527 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939006284411 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753988140716 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196251181953 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028913500376 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.