As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilites. Do you agree or disagree?
People have distinctive views about what kinds of obligation a company should have. While I accept that the top priority of companies is to generate profits, I agree that they should also be responsible for society.
On the one hand, businesses already contribute to society by only focusing on making money. First, by earning huge profits, companies could be able to expand their businesses, which creates more job opportunities for citizens. As a result, the unemployment rate would be reduced. For example, the mobile phone giant Samsung, which has experienced a significant increase in profits over years, has created thousands of jobs for local people since it started investing in Vietnam in 1996. Additionally, companies usually pay more tax when earning higher profits. This money could be used to invest in a variety of vital sectors such as education and health care, which will benefits society as a whole.
On the other hand, there are several reasons why companies also need to have social responsibilities. The first one is that since a growing number of factories in these days has had an adverse impact on the natural environment, businesses are required to take immediate actions to prevent nature from serious damages. For instance, factories could spend money on installing waste treatment systems instead of discharging chemical wastes into rivers. Additionally, Companies should consider donating their money to charity or carrying out social activities by themselves. As an illustration, Vinamilk has provided annual scholarships for students being from impoverished families. This not only helps unfortunate people but enhances images of the company.
In conclusion, while making profits is a fundamental vision of businesses, they should profoundly reflect on their social responsibilities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02239937123 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1545769617 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150096908314 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504745630511 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053918181607 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935010807492 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248669353662 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.