When choosing a job, salary is the most important decision. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People have numerous reasons about opting for a work, job, or career. There is a statement that a person depends mostly on the amount of money they can earn to pick his job. While I accept that this perception is somewhat justifiable, there are more factors besides money that people should weigh up in order to get an appropriate employment.
On the one hand, it is understandable why job seekers often prioritize when choosing a profession. Firstly, money helps people meet their needs and raise their living standards. It is no doubt that only by getting salaries could individuals be able to pay for their costs of living, such as electricity, gas, and water bills, and this could also lead to higher chances to approach modern services, such as high-tech devices and further education. Moreover, a high salary level motivates people to maintain their occupation. Specifically, employees who are well paid often have made a significant contribution to the corporation, which encourages them to stay.
On the other hand, there is a host of compelling reasons as to why I am convinced that candidates should take other components excluding money into consideration before selecting a job. One reason is the working condition. For instance, post-graduates may find it challenging to choose a career in chemistry despite its high earnings, because there is a number of chemical elements that a chemist has to deal with, including contamination and radiation, which would negatively affect their health in the future. Another reason is that candidates often choose their jobs based on passion. This is because pursuing a job they are passionate about could give them the enthusiasm to work hard, regardless of the salary they earn, and this could also lead to an improvement in their work productivity.
In conclusion, while it is irrefutable that money plays an indispensable role in selecting a career path, I would contend that diverse elements should not be disregarded.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'choosing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: choosing
... post-graduates may find it challenging to choose a career in chemistry despite its high ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16459627329 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97206266994 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.5464175353 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.785714286 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103028256271 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401992239632 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432053780911 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0555897835686 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325511197041 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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