When choosing a job, salary is the most important decision. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People have numerous reasons about opting for a work, job, or career. There is a statement that a person depends mostly on the amount of money they can earn to pick his job. I partly agree with this opinion, as there are more factors beside money that people should weigh up in order to get an appropriate employment.
On the one hand, money helps people meet their needs and raise their living standards. It is no doubt that only by getting salaries or wages could individuals be able to pay for their electricity, gas, and water bills. Furthermore, higher income also means a higher chance to approach modern services, such as high-tech devices and further education. Moreover, money motivates people to maintain their occupation. An employee who is well paid indicates that he has made a significant contribution to the corporation, which encourages him to stay.
On the other hand, there are still other components excluding money that impact the decision of selecting a job. As an example, post-graduates may find it challenging to choose a career in chemistry despite its high earnings. That is because of the working condition, as there are a number of chemical elements that a chemist has to deal with, including contamination and radiation, which will negatively affect his health in the future. Another factor is passion. The enthusiasm of many people can make a job appealing, regardless of the salary they earn. Relationship among workers is additionally a criterion that should be taken into consideration.
In conclusion, yet money plays an indispensable part in selecting for a job, I believe diverse reasons should not be disregarded.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'choosing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: choosing
... post-graduates may find it challenging to choose a career in chemistry despite its high ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11029411765 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95247828573 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643382352941 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0347278398 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0978446305187 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0303880439538 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335973798403 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0587380045572 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335910347846 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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