Write about the following topic:
Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
The significance of computers in human history has been a controversial topic. While some say that these devices are the most groundbreaking invention in the last few centuries, I believe that the creation of the Internet is equally important.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that advent of computers has radically transformed different aspects of human society. To begin with, these machines have revolutionized our workplace, allowing information to be stored and shared in noticeably more secured ways. For instance, computer users can save and protect their files with passwords on their devices instead of having to preserve physical documents, which are more susceptible to external factors such as weather conditions. In addition, the existence of computers has also provided the initial ground for other boundary-busting initiatives to take form. Prominent among these include automation and the Internet. They would have all been impossible had it not been for the idea of putting strings of code together for machines to perform our tasks, which originates in the creation of computers.
On the other hand, I reckon that the Internet deserves just as much recognition as computers. The first reason is that the Internet has helped to bridge connections across vast distances. This is reflected in the number of people using social networking sites like Facebook or Twitter to stay connected with their family and loved ones. More importantly, the Internet continuously provides new digital space where information could be stored and most importantly, shared. While computers played a key role in the birth of the Internet as mentioned above, the latter has exerted much more impact on our lives, due to the power of connection it provides.
In conclusion, while I acknowledge the importance of computers, I believe that the Internet is just as crucial in our world. In the future, it is predicted that the Internet will eventually surpass computers, which could be replaced by smart devices such as smartphones and tablets.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...documents, which are more susceptible to external factors such as weather conditi...
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...ved ones. More importantly, the Internet continuously provides new digital space ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, while, for instance, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31790123457 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97284072382 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570987654321 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5695401306 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.866666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110713777184 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366833730027 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0174170705057 0.0667982634062 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672400402606 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258634816864 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.