You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher.
What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The advances in technology have improved human life so drastically that the human race has become the dominant species in the world. However, it seems that they are destroying their own habitat-the Earth at a more rapid speed than ever before. Eminent scientists point out that human activities directly and indirectly cause global warming. This essay will analyze these and propose of solutions to the issue.
With regards to man-made sources resulting in the increase of the world temperature, there are two main types of activities. First and foremost, industrial areas are the primary generator of greenhouse gas emission. Indeed, people’s demand for food and goods are exponentially rising, which leads to the flourishing of numerous factories and industrial zones all over the world. The more vigorously these factors act, the more carbon gas is emitted into the environment. Secondly, daily activities of human beings can be the root of the problem. Every step people take on earth can create carbon footprint, which is an index to show how much the planet is suffering from each individual. For example, those travelling by private transport such as cars or motorbike have higher carbon footprint and do more harm to the environment than those commuting in public vehicles. Apparently, with the total of 9 billion human habitants, the Earth has a great burden that is far beyond its capacity.
In order to tackle this serious issue, it is urgent that everyone and every organization take immediate measures. For factories and industrial zones, government should impose higher taxes and more rigorous laws and regulations so that they are forced to reduce as much exhaust gases as possible. Besides, scientist may cooperate with these firms to construct and perfect the manufacturing as well as waste processing procedures. For each citizen on Earth, changing the habits can be an effective solution. For instance, people need to consider using public transport instead of personal one so that they can also help lower the amount of greenhouse gas emission. What’s more, moving from eating more animal-sourced food to vegetables may decline the carbon footprint, which is a good sign of being more environmentally friendly.
In conclusion, human beings have done so many things to conquer the planet to server their needs. The Earth can be destroyed devastatingly but it will finally survive and thrive. Yet, the human race will not exist once the nature become too harsh to live. Therefore, protecting the environment is saving our future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2159.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26585365854 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80547713645 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59756097561 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4205770503 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1363636364 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123306864735 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337230288859 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330677950994 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671419594472 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315834010493 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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