Young people should spend more time on cultural activities such as music and theatre and less time on sport. How far do you agree with this statement?
Some people believe that youngsters should dedicate most of their time to cultural activities rather than sports. I myself totally disagree with this thought and my reasons for this are as follows.
First of all, balance is the key to success. I think everybody should learn how to maintain balance in their everyday lives. Therefore, it is vitally important to teach our young people about the importance of including different types of activities in their routines. I believe only with providing balance we would be able to achieve our goals. Other than that, we can not expect or force a football player for instance, to stop practicing on the field in order to join a museum. In this way, we are actually traumatizing a good talent and a bright future.
Second of all, sports play an important role on our health situation. Without working out, our body would lose muscles and since most of the jobs are taking place behind a desk these days, soon we are going to gain weight. As a result of obesity, we would gradually get into the troubles of heart diseases and eventually heart failure, not to mention other destructive impacts. On the other hand, With working out on a regular basis the body’s function will increase as well as the risk of depression will decrease. When we exercise, we are releasing all of our tensions and afterwards, our mind will be able to process in a more free manner and there comes the creativity in my belief.
By way of conclusion, not to underestimate the importance of culture of art education, but I personally believe that sports are an inseparable part of a person’s life and I think the best way to teach that to a society, is to constantly teach children about the benefits of working out and providing some encouraging and exhilarating sport events in schools.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8152866242 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73191240141 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573248407643 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.2573814944 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134918137048 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459995284791 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522414612661 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09649195238 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075465394084 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.