In the age of computers and the internet, is there still a need for public libraries?
Although the internet is growing rapidly enabling people to read books online, libraries still play an indispensable role in our daily life.
Firstly, libraries provide books in every fields and of all time. though LIBRARIES' BOOKS ARE NOT AS EASILY TO ACCESS AS E-BOOKS, THEY HAVE BETTER QUALITY FOR THEY ARE THE LATEST BOOKS RATHER THAN OUTDATED BOOKS ONLINE. IN ADDITION, LIBRARY BOOKS ARE AUTHORISED, THEREFORE, THEIR CONTENTS ARE TRUSTWORTHY WHILE THOSE OF SOME EBOOKS ARE CHANGED. IT IS OBVIOUS THAT LIBRARIES PROVIDE BETTER BOOKS WITH ACCURATE INFORMATION THAN THE INTERNET DOES.
SECONDLY, READING BOOKS IN THE LIBRARIES GIVE READERS BENEFITS THAT READING ONLINE CAN NOT DO. READERS ENJOY READING OFFLINE IN THE LIBRARY AS THE QUITE AND CALM AMBIENCE THERE COMFORTS THEM. AS A RESULT, PEOPLE PREFER LIBRARIES THAN THE INTERNET WHEN IT COMES TO READING. IN ADDITION, READING OFFLINE IS BETTER FOR THE HEALTH AS READERS DO NOT HAVE TO INTERACT WITH THE SCREEN OF COMPUTERS OR THE PHONES FOR A LONG TIME. LIBRARIES SEEMS TO OUTWEIGH THE INTERNET THANKS TO ITS ABILITY TO PROTECT READERS' HEALTH.
IN CONCLUSION, PUBLIC LIBRARIES ARE THE GREATEST PLACES TO READ A BOOK, THEY HAVE IMPORTANT ROLES IN THE MODERN LIFE REGARDLESS OF THE ADVENT OF THE INTERNET AND EBOOKS.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Though
... books in every fields and of all time. though LIBRARIES BOOKS ARE NOT AS EASILY TO AC...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12019230769 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48385597319 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552884615385 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3779335121 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8181818182 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252696866714 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102592214589 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388780338007 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154065622777 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257246182241 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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