All over the world, the rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer. What problems does this cause?How can we overcome the problems of poverty?
Poverty continues to be a grave concern throughout the world. In fact, the economic gap has been widening among different section of society for past fewyears. This essay agrees that this trend gives rise to the anti-social activities and hinders the development of the nation, and can be tackled by the governingauthorities by making stringent laws to deal with offensive activities and should provide financial assistance to the underprivileged section.
Primarily, extreme poverty conditions give birth to the criminal actions. In other words, poverty-stricken section of the society have to burn mid night oil to fulfill their rudimentary needs; however, due to burgeoning prices of necessities, it has become a Herculean task for them even to earn the food for the family. Consequently, they prefer to get money by illegal methods, such as robberies, theft, just names a few. A recent survey has disclosed that about 45% of thieves are penniless individuals, whoperfrom these type of offensive to lead a better life, which they can not get, even if they work around the clock. Apart from this, this practice is the biggest obstacle in the way of progress of the country. That is to say, unprivileged masses are unable to access proper education, medical treatment and other facilities owing to lack of funds. Thus, having a greater number of illiterateand unhealthy population would cast an adverse effect of the prosperity of that country.
In regard to the solution, onus rests on the shoulder of governing authorities, as there is pressing need of enforcing laws to eradicate the crime from the society.This is because that community would think twice before committing illegal activities due to the fear of harsh punishment. Moreover, the government should providemonetary assistance to the needy crowd, so that they can take a proper diet. Furthermore, state-of-the-art facilities should also be provided to them without applying and charge. In India, for example, administrative bodies have been allocating funds for the development of impoverished regions of the nation for last three years, and a 15% rise in the progress of people has been noticed since then.
On balance, owing to the unequal distribution of wealth, the gap among poor and rich population is escalating day by day, which gives rise to some ramifications; therefore, it is very crucialto bridge the gap between economic conditions of affluent and to ensure consistent growth of the country. The governing authorities are responsible to make prudent decisions to mitigate this serious problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, apart from, for example, in fact, such as, in other words, in regard to, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2174.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31540342298 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1263258556 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59413202934 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.9557894394 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.875 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5625 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9375 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103767570782 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312945553763 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341600454961 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0595797225656 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287301683996 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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