Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from home and more children will study from home as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible. Do you think it is a negative or a positive development?
With advancement in the field of technology the adults as well as the students of all the nations are certainly stimulated to earn and study respectively from their house. If asked, it is obviously an appreciative development. This essay will discuss arguments on both sides, followed by a conclusion.
To begin with, working from home for employees would be feasible. Since the individuals would have the liberty to complete official task at any time of day, the household activities could be carried out simultaneously during day time. This could reduce the stress of family life and concentrate more on the office work to provide effective work.
In addition, it would cost less fees for youngsters for their education. As the charges of tangible books and uniforms along with the transportation cost are mitigated by pursuing academics through online classes, huge amount of educational charges could be safeguarded. For instance, there are number of online channels providing coaching with no cost, whereas that available in learning centers cost huge.
Conversely, few citizens consider such trend retarding intellectual development of learners. For the lack of feeling of competition by being ignorant of the exterior world they instinctively behave in a monotonous way. For example, the math students from home will not have been benefited with different ideas, which will enhance their thought process, from other pupils to complete the same task.
In conclusion, as the cost effective and convenient technology has been leading people from the entire globe to continue education and employment from their own locations, the arguments above justifies that this inclination is completely an applauding growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52059925094 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93947607156 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65543071161 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8058685636 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.384615385 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179324640434 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573154545152 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612178213087 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948015848669 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527625139984 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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