It is true that art does play a crucial role in almost every culture worldwide. Nevertheless, nowadays individuals increasingly disregard art and they tend to be more concerned about science, technology, and business. There are several reasons behind this phenomenon and a myriad of solutions should be adopted by schools and the government to improve the situation.
To commence with, there are two fundamental reasons why people display little interest in art in this modern world. First and foremost, art is often not a compulsory subject in schools' academic curriculums. For example, in Vietnam, art-related subjects are only optional and have insignificant impacts on students’ academic performances; therefore, they do not have to focus on these disciplines. Moreover, art has little relevance to most professions.Due to the development of ever-advancing technology in this modern era, a large number of employees work in the fields of science, engineering, or business. Therefore, people do not need to acquire art-related knowledge to apply to their jobs, leading to the indifference of art in almost every society.
Fortunately, several measures could be taken by schools and the government to alleviate this problem.The first solution would be for schools to organize extracurricular activities relating to arts. For example, they can hold drawing competitions for students to arouse their interest in this subject. Furthermore, the authorities can propagate the aesthetic values of museums and art galleries on media platforms such as Facebook or Tik tok. This can encourage people to go to these places and enjoy art works, thereby provoking their passion for this field.
In conclusion, the insignificance of art subjects at schools and its irrelevance to connection with most careers these days have contributed to the neglect of artworks. Therefore, several steps like organizing art activities and encouraging people to visit museums and galleries need to be taken by schools and the government to combat this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54952076677 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19856657256 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552715654952 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6225173046 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.071428571 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212123493543 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079585695193 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382367374703 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133780119523 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328878101799 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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