Being a celebrity-such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
No doubt that, being famous and recognized everywhere is a persuading desire for many people. However, deeming the consequences of that aspect is inevitable and afflicting their lives on both psychologically and socially standards. For my own point of view, I hold that the drawbacks of fame are more crucial than the benefits.
Firstly, living under the spot light during your whole day is of course a hazardous lifestyle. Which lead to lack of privacy on celebrities’ lives as long as, their surrounding’s relatives and family members. Correspondingly, creating a fake personality of perfection all the time. Furthermore, pressuring them to be always appreciated and to meet their follow audience’s expectations. As per instance, famous film stars around the world are rushing to post their perfect life’s photographs on social media websites in order to receive positive feedbacks and encouraging comments from their sincere fans. Elsewhere, they feel neglected and may suffer from depression and low self-esteem in case of losing the attention.
Conversely, one may imagine that being famous ought to be more beneficial. Since it is the human nature to seek recognition. Moreover, these famous stars or sports champions gain the public respect regarding their efforts and hard working. As a result, they feel more self-confidence and appreciation.
For example, sports champions who have a huge fan base, tend to be more encouraged to work harder to impress their followers by making more success and winning championships.
To summarize, although some people think that celebrities are living the dream of being recognized and famed, there are plenty of consequences to consider regarding this lifestyle. As it creates pressure and more difficult expectations on their personalities, for what is called “fame tax”.
I hold that living a normal life outside the circle of fame provides you with more privacy and confident rather that under the spot light.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ing famous ought to be more beneficial. Since it is the human nature to seek recognit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, for example, no doubt, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52922077922 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23739397776 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8118026158 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.176470588 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1176470588 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223768814311 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655187681473 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567206782354 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118325019491 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044613711605 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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