The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
• Describe how the rubbish collection system in not working properly.
• Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours
• Suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you this letter to complain about a hazardous matter regarding garbage system in my neighborhood. Let me explain the situation in detail, my name is Jack Smith. I live in house 737, Victor Bond street. Unfortunately, it is been 5 weeks since the last garbage truck came to pick up our rubbish pins. Which resulted in huge piles of waste materials in front of our houses.
My neighbors and I are devastated by the current disappointing appearance of our steer. Additionally, these mountains of rubbish are releasing unpleasant odours, consequently attracting insects and mosquitos all day long. Furthermore, a couple of our residents complained about rats and raccoons rooming inside their backyards.
I urgently requesting an immediate reaction from your side to solve this crucial situation. I suggest you send trucks as soon as possible to pick up the current garbage. Moreover, rechecking the schedules of rubbish trucks, and monitor their tracks to assure that they pass by our street weekly to collect our pins.
I appreciate your cooperation and looking forward to hearing from you regarding this aspect as soon as possible.
Your faithfully,
Jack Smith
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 316, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...truck came to pick up our rubbish pins. Which resulted in huge piles of waste materia...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, look, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24870466321 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94774485159 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678756476684 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.331577863 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9230769231 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166948591479 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510804755981 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505319753308 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896001748551 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376863556772 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.