You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter:
• Explain why you're interested in the tour.
• Ask for information about dates and prices.
• Express your concerns about your fitness level.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to this letter to inquire about your offered one-week tour in the mountains. Let me explain myself in more details. My name is Jack Smith. Recently, I saw your brochure about this excursion and I am considering enrolling myself with you for many reasons. Firstly, I was looking for a suitable exercising tour to join to restore my fitness. Secondly, I am fond by mountain scenes and wondering in natural environment.
I would like to inform about the different programs of the trip and the prices. Additionally, I need to know the proposed time for the trip, the dates and the venue for gathering before travelling. Furthermore, the expected track of the journey if possible. In order to, check my calendar and decide on a suitable date for me.
Another important note I am wondering about. Recently, I experienced a car accident and ended up suffering from a broken arm and some injuries in my leg. Right now, I am 100% cured but, I am not supposed to exhaust my self for extended periods of time or carry any loads on my back. Correspondingly, I am wondering if I would me able to coup with the other contestants and the trip program. I am looking forward to hearing from you about my questions.
Your faithful,
Jack Smith
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72522522523 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82755537412 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599099099099 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.614162472 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.5625 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.875 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131527245149 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410767586578 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537062210568 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894921618311 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681831146759 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.