Being literate in technology or the internet is so popular that many believe that it will no longer be necessary to read conventional books as the main source of material for education. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
Smart technology has never been so advanced and in the limelight, as it is today in the 21st century, resulting in the majority of the people believing that it is the epitome of education. Being able to conserve our environment and having access to the latest material are the two reasons I will elaborate in this essay as I strongly agree with the motion.
Firstly, technology can replace the demand for goods such as paper for books with smart devices like tablets. With the rise in population and consequently the increase in demand for goods exploitation of our natural resources has escalated exponentially. A recent magazine published by the New Foundland School, which has replaced the conventional books with computers, shares the large amount of contribution they have made towards carbon-neutral teaching. Upgrading to computers and smart devices will result in a decrease in deforestation and hence revive our environment.
Secondly, adapting to internet-based study has given students access to more information than traditional books. Teachers have opted to introduce knowledge sharing through various educational websites that are constantly being updated and in parallel with current affairs. In an interview with the principal of New York State college, the introduction of web-based learning last year resulted in higher attendance and an overall increase in performance by students for the academic year. With various free sources available on the internet, students of all ages voluntarily engage in gaining knowledge and hence increasing the literacy rates.
In conclusion, the hustle-bustle for technology has drastically elevated as the benefits are observed globally. A reduction in the exploitation of natural resources and the freedom to learn anything anywhere are the main reasons to migrate from traditional books to technology-based sources.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58041958042 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13853601747 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597902097902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3325471611 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171176688684 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583033538489 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351318077724 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103440236241 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338228531668 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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