Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
Do you agree or disagree?
Provide relevant examples if necessary.
Usually, there are two driving forces that motivates people in their job. The amount of money that they make and the fact that how happy and satisfied they are with what they are doing. It is often argued by some people that a well-paid job is more important even if the work that you are doing does not appeal to you. I completely disagree with this argument and believe that job satisfaction is more important than high wage.
First of all, a person motivation for doing a particular work depends on whether he likes it or not. If an employee does not enjoy what he is doing, he would often find it hard to encourage himself and give hundred percent to his work. This will lead to mediocrity and hence no extra ordinary performance could be expected from him. For instance, most innovation in different fields like science and technology have been a result of a truly passionate people tirelessly working on their ideas. If they had not been truly driven by what they were doing, we would not be witnessing so many technological advancements.
Secondly, money does not buy one happiness. It helps people fulfil their necessities and afford certain necessities. However, true joy comes when people feel fulfilled and believe that they are doing something substantial in their lives. Not enjoying what they are doing results in stress and depression and hence, causes unrest in their lives. For instance, despite his highly paid job in Microsoft, Elon Musk bid good-bye to it and stepped into food business as that was what he had dreamt of doing since his childhood. After years of hard work and ups and downs, he is now one of the richest people in the world. This implies that if one does what truly excites him, in the long run, he would end up making more money than those who detest their work duties.
In summary, I strongly believe that job satisfaction is more important in life because it keeps on motivated and happy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 207, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...d it hard to encourage himself and give hundred percent to his work. This will lead to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in summary, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72271386431 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46125907316 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566371681416 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8650919196 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1764705882 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146918535262 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538986880149 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805880397167 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123358906578 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907383159413 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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