In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recently year, the number of people who are living in nursing home in England, Wales and Ireland has been increasing. Some people said that family should pay for the care to the nursing homes. On the other side, some people believe that Government should take the responsibility for the cost of nursing homes because the first reason is that, some people are too old and they cannot pay for the care of other family members and the second reason is that some families cannot afford to pay for the care.
Initially, Government should pay for the cost of nursing home because some families have no young member in the family who can take the responsibility for the cost of care. Moreover, some countries have an aging population due to their healthier lifestyle and the advanced state of medical technology. To illustrate, it is predicted that the one third of Japanese population will be over 65 years with in 20 years. Therefore, it would not be possible for 70 years old person to pay for the care of their elderly parents in the future. I think taxpayer money should be used for elderly care.
Furthermore, financial condition varies depending upon the families, so some families cannot afford to pay the cost of nursing home; they have to take care of their elder. While, some people think it is natural to take care of their family members and they are willing to bath them, feed them and shower them, but the other people find it very difficult. It is not uncommon that family members use financial, physical, and psychological abuse on their elder parents because of the stress from taking care them. For example, due to the global economic recession, the number of euthanasia's cases has increased in some countries.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that government should take the responsibility for the care of aged person because some families’ members are too old to pay for them and might be a heavy burden to take care of them at home. Government should start the pension system for the care of elderly citizens.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: TO_BATH[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to bathe'?
Suggestion: to bathe
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, third, while, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8125 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55608575368 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4375 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.6229251039 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402093339698 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170478526849 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107162141181 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300503494886 0.151304729494 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700835224309 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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