Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain the main causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.
Nowadays, the number of people who suffer the obesity is on the increase and among these group a vast majority of sufferers are children. There are various reasons for this trend such as scarcity of physical activity and wrong eating habits which leads to serious effects on the social health.
The most important causes for the increasing number of people with obesity are the sedentary life style and unhealthy food habits. During the past decades, technology has dominated almost all aspects of human's lives. Although it could make life much easier in different ways, it had detrimental effects on individual's life style. children of this generation are more interested in playing with their computers or X boxes instead of doing physical activities which will lead to serious health problems in society in future.Furthermore, unhealthy eating habits such as eating hamburgers which are high in fat will cause diseases such as heart attack and stroke that are debilitating and consequently the government authorities have to spend more money on social health such as building more hospitals, medical equipment and researches.
There are some beneficial solutions for this scheme that can diminish the negative effects of obesity in society. Firstly, governments can raise awareness among the residents of mega cities by conducting campaings or educating children through some training at schools. Secondly, government can impose high tax policies on unhealthy and less nutritious food products in the market and they should put signs on these sort of food. Finally, more physical activity courses should be added to schools' curriculum, as a result this will boost the average health among pupils. A salient example of this is Sweden who could decrease the children's obesity up to 30% by adding the exciting sports to the schools' time table.
In conclusion, not only lack of physical activities and unhealthy food products but also the defficiency of social awareness about the consequences of obesity will cause some detrimental effects for the society especially next generation. governments should address this problem by educating people about this issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, sort of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39117647059 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76498590572 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561764705882 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.746919572 49.4020404114 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.0 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16909171294 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063220534711 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504400987839 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114424577936 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383497459498 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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