Being a celebrity - such as a famous film star or sport personality - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Nowadays, the number of famous people who are renowned all across the world is on the increase. Although fame brings money, strength and confidence for people, I believe that it has more drawbacks than benefits.
There are a variety of reasons why I would argue that famous people have to deal with more problems. Firstly, they are always followed by paparazzi and consequently are on the tabloids all the time. It means that there is an invasion into their privacy and their life is in the public eye. Secondly, they are role models for teenagers which is an intricate responsibility for celebrities and they should concern about their behaviour, clothing and treatment. A salient example of this is George Colloney, who is a famous American actor and has more than 10 million followers in his Instagram which is a social media and almost 70% of them are aged between 11 and18.
On the other hand, famous people access better equipment such as social welfare, job opportunities, education and healthcare. Furthermore, they live in luxurious houses, drive fashionable cars, wear designer clothes and own private airplanes and yacht, as a result life is much more exciting, hectic and thriving for them. To support my claim, I can refer to an article having been published in Times magazine, indicates that more than 10 billion dollars spent in fashion industry by artists in 2008.
In conclusion, although being a celebrity brings some advantages for famous people, the detrimental effects of fame should not be neglected since famous people have no privacy.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07751937984 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68772110176 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631782945736 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3864550328 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.090909091 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184378483416 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631902518048 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616888517566 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123878392101 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584876118085 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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