It is argued by some masses that children born in destitute family are well prepared than child from affluent family. However, in my opinion both children has benefits of their own family backgrounds.
While considering, the advantages of being born in poor family children start learning since childhood about those difficulties which arises in their daily life such as dealing with financial needs. Secondly, as they are born in deprived condition they become habitual of doing every sorts of things by themselves which turns them in to hard working person before their adulthoods. furthermore, after having lots of responsibilities in the the young age they turn out to be self dependent personality. But in at present time nothing is impossible in world for those who have will , for example, two years ago a news become sensation in media when Hima das an athlete from excessively poor family became superstar overnight by winning gold medal in world championship, how did she manage to do that, definitely, her hard work and challenging nature made her to do so which she learnt while growing up in poor family.
On the other hand, the first positive side for youngsters from wealthy family is, they have pre plated platform to lead their professional career because of strong economical background which can easily lead them to become super rich. For example, an Indian eminent industrialist Mukesh Ambani has a son who graduated from the university probably two years ago now assisting in his fathers business and contributing more economy to his firm. In addition filthy rich children have wealthy friends from different background by which they could learn about various others businesses.
To recapitulate, a child from poor family can achieve anything if he or she utilizes the challenging nature in future development, however, rich children have abundant money to make the startup to lead the path of success.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this child' or 'those children'?
Suggestion: this child; those children
...destitute family are well prepared than those child is from affluent family. However, in my...
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Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...working person before their adulthoods. furthermore, after having lots of responsibilities ...
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Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...fter having lots of responsibilities in the the young age they turn out to be self depe...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...fter having lots of responsibilities in the the young age they turn out to be self depe...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 556, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sent time nothing is impossible in world for those who have will , for example, t...
^^
Line 5, column 581, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ssible in world for those who have will , for example, two years ago a news becom...
^^
Line 8, column 280, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...example, an Indian eminent industrialist Mukesh Ambani has a son who graduated fr...
^^
Line 8, column 447, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ntributing more economy to his firm. In addition filthy rich children have wealthy frien...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 523, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ealthy friends from different background by which they could learn about various ...
^^
Line 11, column 42, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o recapitulate, a child from poor family can achieve anything if he or she utiliz...
^^
Line 11, column 160, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...development, however, rich children are have abundant money to make the startup to l...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18037974684 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77140065038 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636075949367 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.8758214755 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.7 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277139653673 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108128857915 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782955574442 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176155210994 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636164095946 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this child' or 'those children'?
Suggestion: this child; those children
...destitute family are well prepared than those child is from affluent family. However, in my...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...working person before their adulthoods. furthermore, after having lots of responsibilities ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...fter having lots of responsibilities in the the young age they turn out to be self depe...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...fter having lots of responsibilities in the the young age they turn out to be self depe...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 556, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sent time nothing is impossible in world for those who have will , for example, t...
^^
Line 5, column 581, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ssible in world for those who have will , for example, two years ago a news becom...
^^
Line 8, column 280, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...example, an Indian eminent industrialist Mukesh Ambani has a son who graduated fr...
^^
Line 8, column 447, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ntributing more economy to his firm. In addition filthy rich children have wealthy frien...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 523, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ealthy friends from different background by which they could learn about various ...
^^
Line 11, column 42, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o recapitulate, a child from poor family can achieve anything if he or she utiliz...
^^
Line 11, column 160, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...development, however, rich children are have abundant money to make the startup to l...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18037974684 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77140065038 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636075949367 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.8758214755 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.7 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277139653673 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108128857915 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782955574442 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176155210994 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636164095946 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.