Nowadays in this digital era children are spending enormous time watching televisions rather then reading books, some individuals argue that this will have a negative impact on their children education ,although I do believe that books have a greater importance and it can not be replaced. To some extent television programs can be used as an additional learning tool.
We can not denied that tv programmes have huge impact on children behavior and education ,there for we can not ignore tv as a learning tool ,but mostly due to the fact that children often misuse television in the disappearance of parents,and they find cartoons more attractive then educative programmes ,however in the pats 3 decades there have been a tremendous change in the content of children educative programmes ,for instant sesame street is a children television series that helps prepar toddlers to school by making them learn about numbers words colors and many thing in a way that is attractive and appealing for them.
On the other hand we can not dismiss the importence of books in young children development and education, it sparks children imagination and let them develop early literacy skills and ,in addition to that they will have better social and communication skills and they well learn to value books in young age ,furthermore they will have better social and communication skills
To sum up it is obvious that books and televisions shows are both important tool in children education ,however I do agree that books have more importence then televisions show,but both elements can be very useful in teaching young children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, so, then, well, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17358490566 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77442934135 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 20.2975951904 325% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 235.612499668 49.4020404114 477% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 342.75 106.682146367 321% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.25 20.7667163134 319% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.25 7.06120827912 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269432911887 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173393925674 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447040181647 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175915976514 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635758685975 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.0 13.0946893788 275% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.49 50.2224549098 9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.0 11.3001002004 257% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 28.4 10.1190380762 281% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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