You borrowed an important textbook during the last term from a classmate. You now realize your classmate has returned home overseas and you still have the book.
Write a letter to him/her. In your letter:
apologize for the mistake
find out how important the book is to him/her
say what you will do
Dear hiba
Hops this letter finds you in good health. Please accept my apology for not returning The Basic Of Physics book that I borrowed from you last semester , I was surprised to find out you have returned to your home country Italy immediately after graduation.
I suppose this book is important to you . If I remember correctly you have plans to pursue master in physics in your home country . I am not sure if this book will help you to pass the entrance exam .
Based on your response ,I am welling to send it to you and bear all the courier cost .or if you can wait for a while our classmate tom is visiting your home town next week I can give him the book so he can give it to you by hand I think this would be a better way then sending it through post office .
I look forward to hear from you
Best wishes
Amal
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear hiba Hops this letter finds you in good healt...
^^^^
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...k that I borrowed from you last semester , I was surprised to find out you have re...
^^
Line 7, column 40, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... I suppose this book is important to you . If I remember correctly you have plans ...
^^
Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...suppose this book is important to you . If I remember correctly you have plans to ...
^^
Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e master in physics in your home country . I am not sure if this book will help yo...
^^
Line 7, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e if this book will help you to pass the entrance exam . Based on your respo...
^^
Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...will help you to pass the entrance exam . Based on your response ,I am welli...
^^
Line 11, column 23, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rance exam . Based on your response ,I am welling to send it to you and bear ...
^^
Line 11, column 85, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... it to you and bear all the courier cost .or if you can wait for a while our class...
^^
Line 11, column 300, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... way then sending it through post office . I look forward to hear from you Be...
^^
Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... through post office . I look forward to hear from you Best wishes Amal
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 32, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fice . I look forward to hear from you Best wishes Amal
^^^^
Line 15, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... forward to hear from you Best wishes Amal
^^^^
Line 17, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to hear from you Best wishes Amal
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, well, while, i suppose, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 680.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15842679845 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6625 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.2399267217 44.8134815571 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 97.1428571429 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 4.34317383033 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419550625986 0.216113520407 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193602350259 0.0766984524023 252% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771878919687 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249791857596 0.12726935374 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802445620439 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.67 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.