Dear hiba
How have you been? it's been a while since we were in touch .I realy want to think you for your invitation and also apologize for my absence.
Recently I started a new job at a tech company , I am working as an assistant to one of the team leaders there, And because there was a launching of new project by the team that iam working with and we did have a dead line to meet my schedule was very hectic and and i couldn't make it to your birthday party .
Iam sure your upset that i haven't contacted you right away,But as i previously mentioned my schedule was loaded and because i'm new employee it would not be appropriate to ask for a day off.
Please let me make it up to you, There is this Italian restaurant , I know that your love Italian food and the place as my coworker told me is absolutely amazing,if you don't have any plans this friday i would like to take you there.
I’m looking forward to receiving your call soon.
Faithfully
AMAL
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear hiba How have you been? its been a while sin...
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Dear hiba How have you been? its been a while since we were in touch .I...
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...ba How have you been? its been a while since we were in touch .I realy want to ...
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...its been a while since we were in touch .I realy want to think you for your invit...
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...s been a while since we were in touch .I realy want to think you for your invita...
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...ine to meet my schedule was very hectic and and i couldnt make it to your birthday part...
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...y coworker told me is absolutely amazing,if you dont have any plans this friday i w...
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...er told me is absolutely amazing,if you dont have any plans this friday i would like...
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...,if you dont have any plans this friday i would like to take you there. I&apos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3606557377 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36109053741 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655737704918 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.10446456 44.8134815571 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.0 76.5299724578 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 16.8248392259 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282803616956 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125974968412 0.0766984524023 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865920812793 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160218258825 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760266803165 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 8.37731958763 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.6 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.