Children today are not as fit and healthy as in the past. Discuss the causes for this situation with relevant examples and give your opinion on possible solutions.
It is irrefutable that, nowadays many pupils are facing cause related to their health and fitness. It is a matter of intense anxiety which has caused due to children’s bad eating habits, less physical activities and spending most of the time in front of television or computer.
First of all, most of them are spending time only on indoor activities such as Video games and Internet gadgets which made them Eye-sight problems early ages. Secondly, many parents are trying to give better lifestyle to their children, They have been given more freedom and not to do give any work. As a result of which they become indolence and obese. Finally, very bad eating food habits which impact them the detrimental effect on their health. With the excess pocket money, they always attracted to eat junk food, candies, and beverages, which turned into teeth decay and stomach-ache problems.
Once a solution to this situation is the active intervention of parents, parents should stop them their eating habits and also stop to give an excess of pocket money that's highly recommended. They try to make them time busy with outdoor activities such as Cricket, Football, Badminton, and Tennis. If children are lazy in doing exercise and daily work then it is parents’ responsibility to make their children do all those things. Also, motivate them to do yoga and ask them to go to the gym to maintain their physical body. What is more, schools can also play important role in developing children’s health by involving physical training in the curriculum.
To recapitulate this, Parents are more responsible to make their pupil more active. Government and Schools Schools should run health awareness program, which educates students about healthy lifestyle and fitness
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, such as, as a result, first of all, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16319444444 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70720907933 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.808661679 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.214285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102700050039 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355830949257 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276970031714 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0664562908673 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118756993946 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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