Unemployment is the main issue today with many graduates failed to get a job. It is generally thought to encourage employees working in a high post to get retired when reach the age of 55, certainly giving chance to the coming young employees. In my opinion, I strongly believe that giving opportunity reduce unemployment and improves economic development.
As we see many job seekers do not get job based on profession due to lack of experience and other skills. For instance, we find many people going to urban places opting for low category jobs even with high degrees and this results in increase of unemployment in many countries.
Based on these issues which is effecting our people, government must take necessary steps by imposing policies such as pension plan in companies to encourage higher post employees to take retirement inorder to give young employees a chance to show their skills and ideas requires for the economic development of society
In summary, I finally conclude my point in agree to reduce the most important issue we see today by implementing retirement plan with an early advantage of pension to old employees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, for instance, in summary, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03684210526 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81064951435 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.127684531 49.4020404114 298% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.5 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6666666667 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16946926556 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824389707615 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549355776911 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939824886766 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588766936667 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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