Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities.
To what extent do you agree ?
Sports and social facilities are important key points for our native communities, organizations should serve these type of
valuable amenity to local circle to maintain the health and delightful environment.
There are multiple outcome if agency provide exercise equipment's as well as corporates should arrange some specials program for children's and senior citizens. So, they can participate into extra activity to maintain their health. Furthermore arranging the social fair and invite sports celebrity to enhance the interest of young generation in sport field. In sport festival, company employees and their family should actively participate. It will decrease the stress level but increase the moral which would be help full for them.
Arranging the social and sport facilities for people would be help full for company reputation as well, Moreover it will limelight the company brand in the eyes of public and everyone will know the name of company. Despite organization no need to spent extra money for advertisement. Hosting such kind of function for native community will help employer to save their tax rebates.
I believe that social & sports program will help our society to accommodating between different culture and enhance there physical strengths. On other hand companies also committed to prospiouces growth of society which help them to become the high value brand in this competitive world.
To conclude these type of activity may help our neighborhood and intra community relationship will create new milestone from services and economical point of view.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'outcomes'?
Suggestion: outcomes
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... corporates should arrange some specials program for childrens and senior citizen...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...xtra activity to maintain their health. Furthermore arranging the social fair and invite sp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55967078189 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76695804803 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633744855967 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0545841263 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.583333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264177134253 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911854775746 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651488816339 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124467804501 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746244513318 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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