Consumer goods have become the most important part of people’s life.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In the world today, it is not an uncommon fact that consumerism and technology have become a part of life due to the positive attributes associated with them. Even though this change has some negative implications, the society is definitely benefited by several products available currently.
Firstly, the significant drawback that has to be considered is the environmental degradation caused by these goods. Plastic is one such product which is coupled with almost all goods used by humans. Illegal disposal of plastic is a threat to soil and marine life. Similarly, explosive usage of motor vehicles has contributed to the air pollution through increase of carbon footprint by combustion of fuels. All these anthropogenic activities are result of consumables and are hazardous to the ecosystem. Secondly, consumerism can possibly be argued to be responsible for materialistic behaviour among the people, slowly neglecting the importance of social connections and relationships. Few spend on extravagances in order to exhibit social status and power. This is a negative trend.
However, the products available in the market these days are enhancing the living standards and directing the world progress. These products amplified with technology have proved that various things which were once considered impossible no more remain as impossible. Can we imagine a world with aeroplane or computer or four-wheeler now ? The world would be handicapped without these. As one said "Necessity is the mother of all invention", we have hundred of thousands of products as a result of demanding needs. So, it is the personal choice of utilising the goods based on requirement and not valuing them excessively over other aspects of life.
In conclusion, consumerism has numerous advantages in the present generation and surely exceed the disadvantages but the wise decisions to prioritize among all the facets of life are what really matter.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, similarly, so, as to, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50830564784 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18605857695 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611295681063 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9034936467 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5294117647 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156958557554 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380045882427 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455222754109 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900993557473 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184699256604 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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