Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Climate change, this word is no foreign to the world now. Countries around the world are experiencing impacts of global warming. There are other global issues in play, such as overpopulation, social, governance, poverty and list goes on. Many countries especially some developing ones are dealing with issues and if there are no immediate action taken to adverse the effects, it can result in global crisis sooner than expected.
For example, India has seen rapid increase in development in just a last decade. But this growth does not come cheap, It certainly has taken its toll on the country. Firstly, with ever increasing population of country, demand for better infrastructure is also increasing. While in metro cities certain projects like metro and BRTS bus system are implemented, lack of better city roads and public parking has contributed to traffic. Furthermore, increase in traffic means increase in pollution. Metro cities has seen influx in number of vehicles on the road like ever before and lack of government regulations on vehicle standards has contributed to more carbon emission and pollution. Lastly, in less developed villages, even today access to clean water is electricity is considered a rare find.
So can we do anything to reverse the damage already done? Not completely, but we can take first step toward change by changing ourselves. If we take pledge to cut down single use plastic, use fresh water wisely, adapt electric vehicles, small changes in individual lifestyle can make big difference. Secondly, Government should also consider applying stricter regulations regarding vehicle emissions and traffic rules. Rural areas can be uplifted if provided with clean energy sources and rain water harvesting for farming.
UN have taken big step by setting 17 sustainable development goals which are interconnected and serves common purpose of leave no one behind. All countries around the world has target to achieve these goals by 2030. There are various goals such as investment in green energy, education for all, access to clean water, reduce inequality etc. are especially important for developing nations and certainly a step in the right direction.
In conclusion, we certainly do have global crisis at our hand and not just environmental, but also social and governance issues need equal attention to achieve overall success. With new global policies set by UN combined with individual and government commitment, Let us all work towards a common goal - We will leave this planet better than we found it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'targeted'.
Suggestion: targeted
...ind. All countries around the world has target to achieve these goals by 2030. There a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2147.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2881773399 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79230086863 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605911330049 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3605868949 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5909090909 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77272727273 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0839178480296 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027232437389 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436454344387 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0468200974396 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296127673745 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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