Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world.
What problems are associated with this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Individuals are choosing a lazy lifestyle over a healthy one, even though there are several health clubs all around them. In this essay, we will discuss how leading such a life can have adverse effects on an individual and how it can be tackled and solved.
When one allows oneself to get used to such a style of living, they tend to put pressure on their body and in turn it leads to harming their well-being. In a successful research carried on by leading scientists, it was found out that those who prefer none to very few physical activities, tend to become highly obese, which in certain situations can be life-threatening. Furthermore, it has been found that living like so can invite a lot of diseases which consequently force them to spend a lot of money on medical representatives and medicines. Coupled with an excess of intake of harmful substances and oily food, it takes a toll on a human being.
To combat this, it is always advised to cut down on food items that are high on fats to reduce gaining unnecessary weight. For the ones who are unable to do so, going for walks on a regular basis in an open garden can have many positive effects. Not only it improves the digestion system, but it can also help in socializing as well as connecting with interesting people. Another way of overcoming the issue of such a lifestyle is by way of Yoga or a gym.
All the things considered; it is always advisable to quit leading a sedentary life for a much healthier one thereby improving one’s overall health.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61029411765 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74719698292 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5655443976 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101503250002 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381146436048 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.022905803304 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597297935112 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331464820382 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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