Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the World, particularly in their contribution to global warming.
Why is global warming a problem?
What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?
Nowadays, many developed countries are creating more environmental pollution which increases the rise in temperature all over the world. Ozone layer is severely affected due to carbon emission from various sectors which attribute the global warming. In the following passage, I will explain negative impacts as well as steps to lower the danger of global warming.
The increase in earth’s temperature is called Global warming. As the climate rises would melt icebergs of Antarctic and Arctic, which raise the sea level all over the world. For instance, some studies have stated that by 2100 our planet will lose 30% of land due to sea invasion. Additionally, it has been witnessed that climate pattern is being changed all over the countries. Because of this change in temperature pattern some nations are experiencing the following conditions such as extreme hot, flood or severe draught. It also has a cascading effect to all living beings due to extreme heat. Therefore, above are some potential dangers of global warming.
Carbon emission from vehicles of developed countries weakens the ozone layer which increase earth’s temperate drastically. Some nations are using ethanol for public transport which doesn’t emit Carbon smoke. For instance, South Africa has already using ethanol for their public vehicles and have witnessed significant drop in carbon emissions. In addition, battery-powered vehicles are another alternative over consumption of oil products. Most importantly, some countries use coal for their electricity production which is considered to another important factor to instigate global warming. Instead, more solar and wind energy could be used to produce electricity for domestic needs. Thus, the above alternatives could be used to cut Global warming to a great extent.
To end, every nation needs to be cautious on the alarming rise in earth’s temperature and the adverse impacts to all living beings. Usage of ethanol and battery-powered vehicles for public transport could reduce the Global warming drastically.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'sawed', 'sawn', 'seen'.
Suggestion: sawed; sawn; seen
...anol for their public vehicles and have saw significant drop in carbon emissions. I...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...ant factor to instigate global warming. Instead more solar and wind energy could be use...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53650793651 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8843921046 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5990823935 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.7894736842 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5789473684 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23229340304 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779516818085 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695515538327 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153830616349 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464250757904 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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